Even Candent Days

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even candent days
cannot drive the willow leaves
from their homing place
                                                     (Magical Mystical Teacher)

a mother’s cool hand comforts
his brow –  burning with fever
                                                                                                  (WS)

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For Carpe Diem Tan Renga ‘even candent days’

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9 thoughts on “Even Candent Days

  1. To me the combination of the idea of home with the cool hand of a mother makes this a poem about comforting things generally. Congratulations for creating such a large idea in just two lines.

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