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silent night –
         again, the cicadas miss
       the green corn moon
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  ©2013 Wabi Sabi
For Haiku Bandit Society ‘August Moon Viewing Party’
(I am delighted to say that this poem won a ‘Dottie Dot’ award at  the Haiku Bandit Society blog for August)For Recuerda Mi Corazon ‘Haiku My Heart’
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nicely done
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The thought came to mind that maybe the cicada’s songs are indeed a lament as their life span can be seen so much more quickly than our own. Then again, maybe i think too much about such things. Still, got my attention in a positive way. Good Job.
Peace
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perfection !!
yes
yes
the cicadas missed this full moon
but
may we all sing
until
the very last possible moment ♥
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Amen!!
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Another name for this beautiful moon…summer bliss
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You capture such poignancy in these words – thank you!
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silence? the cicadas do have a short life so being silent would rub against the grain of them, don’t you think?
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Yes silence. They are gone by mid-August.
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I can see why this haiku would be honored with an award (oh, and you too): it’s exquisite.
My Lady Wisdom
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Lovely, and congratulations for the honoring of these few small words that say so much…
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congratulations! well deserved, you are an amazing poet. ♥♥
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beautiful and well deserving of an award!!!
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