i love it too, and the moment’s pause it gave me, remembering a time when I watched the moon and thought of the space between me and someone i care about. really nice haiku
I take this haiku from the moon’s perspective: The moon is reflecting on the space. And that leads me to the conclusion that the moon is lonely, and wanting companionship. Poignant.
Really nice!
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What a joy to walk in the light of the moon and to see it’s reflection in e.g. an old pond, or a puddle.
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I love the ambiguity here.
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Thank you. That is exactly what I was aiming for!
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i love it too, and the moment’s pause it gave me, remembering a time when I watched the moon and thought of the space between me and someone i care about. really nice haiku
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Surreal but familiar at the same time. Beautifully penned.
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The moon brings memories. Nicely Wabi!
Hank
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Another wonderful one
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I take this haiku from the moon’s perspective: The moon is reflecting on the space. And that leads me to the conclusion that the moon is lonely, and wanting companionship. Poignant.
A Place to Reflect
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It’s afraid we’re going to fall out of the sky after the incident with the forbidden fruit:)
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Love it, nice juxtapositions!
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Beautiful and studying it intently! Lovely thought but not 5-7-5. Must learn to break away a bit.
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gorgeous haiku. doesn’t get any better than this!
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That space somehow seems unbridgeable.
Reflecting on Failures
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contrast of being together alone…exceptional…
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Lovely.
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