Tanka Whirl

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  echo of geese

heard by an old climber

fallen rock rumbles

reminding him of their retreat

to a cabin of love

 wild island

 covered in velvet fog

 bridge to the summer sky

shrouded in pink and  gold

they followed the birdsong

*

crossing the meadow

a bird swoops back and forth

looking for her gift of seed,

when will it finally understand

she is not coming again?

*

a bend in the lane near the cabin

his foot suddenly unstable

he falters, looking up for an instant

the full moonlight flooding his heart

 with her essence

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 ©2013 Wabi Sabi

For Sunday Whirl – words  for this week – meadow, bend, lane, unstable, bridge, island, fallen, rock, retreat, bird, bear, wild

For Poets United – ‘poetry pantry’

For Carpe Diem ‘free style’

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34 thoughts on “Tanka Whirl

  1. Enjoyed especially the ‘crossing the meadow’ poem. I picture a bird looking for its mate who will not return…..

    Always nice to see you in Poetry Pantry.

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  2. Portrays the struggles of a lonely heart heavily burdened with memories from the past!! He seems to visit his cabin of love to add color to his many faded dreams!!

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  3. fallen rock rumbles
    reminding him of their retreat
    to a cabin of love

    Memories are good in many ways. They rekindle all the wonderful times. It makes one more alert after that. Brilliant take Wabi!

    Hank

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