Evening Lull

Posted on June 20, 2013 by Barbara Kaufmann

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the darting swallows

making their own breeze

at nightfall

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©Wabi Sabi 2013

For Carpe Diem ‘evening lull’

14 thoughts on “Evening Lull”

Maggie Grace on June 20, 2013 at 12:30 PM said:

Such peace in your words.

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Alice Keys on June 20, 2013 at 3:00 PM said:

I can hear the swallows. Thanks.

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Look for A Lovely Thing on June 20, 2013 at 3:33 PM said:

Truly you are a haiku artist. You paint such lovely images with your words.

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heavenhappens on June 20, 2013 at 5:34 PM said:

They do don’t they, their little wings never cease to beat the air. Lovely poem x

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Poet Laundry on June 20, 2013 at 6:06 PM said:

So lovely and peaceful.

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Mark M. Redfearn on June 20, 2013 at 6:39 PM said:

If this were calligraphy, I would know that you used only a few swift and well-placed strokes of the brush.

Evening Lull

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jrbsays on June 20, 2013 at 11:24 PM said:

What a wonderful image of swallows and I love your barefoot hoping too 🙂

Yuunagi Uluru

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- jrbsays on June 20, 2013 at 11:24 PM said:
  
  …or hopping 🙂
  
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  - WabiSabi on June 21, 2013 at 4:18 PM said:
    
    My bare feet are hoping not to trip over themselves!
    
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justjoyfulness on June 21, 2013 at 12:56 AM said:

Wow! Beautiful!!!

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Chevrefeuille on June 21, 2013 at 3:51 AM said:

Awesome piece Wabi … worthy a classical haiku master.

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readinpleasure on June 21, 2013 at 8:10 AM said:

A wonderful breeze 🙂

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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on June 21, 2013 at 9:36 AM said:

Wonderful haiku. Really quit and silent with swallows

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4joy on June 21, 2013 at 3:31 PM said:

sensory delight…seeing, hearing, and feeling those birds as they swoop and soar…..love the new haiga header…..

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