Ripples

Posted on June 14, 2013 by Barbara Kaufmann

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how a blue heron skimming the surface creates a stir

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For Haiku Heights ‘ripples’

15 thoughts on “Ripples”

readinpleasure on June 14, 2013 at 10:43 AM said:

And what a lovely stir it is 🙂

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Grace on June 14, 2013 at 12:44 PM said:

I like the image of the blue heron ~

My question though is with the format ~ do you normally write your words in one line, instead of the traditional 3 lines ~

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- WabiSabi on June 14, 2013 at 2:05 PM said:
  
  It all depends on the poem. �Some poems don’t divide nicely into three lines so I present them as one-liners. I am not sure if that is a good enough reason to use the one line format, but it works for me! Here’s a link for more information:�http://www.thehaikufoundation.org/2010/07/28/12th-sailing-one-line-haiku/
  
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Alice Keys on June 14, 2013 at 3:36 PM said:

The little fish jump under the shadow. Ripples. Very nice.

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magicalmysticalteacher on June 14, 2013 at 3:50 PM said:

You leave me longing for more…

Rippling with Fertility

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Maggie Grace on June 14, 2013 at 4:22 PM said:

Love…smooth as silk.

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Look for A Lovely Thing on June 14, 2013 at 5:33 PM said:

Every day you treat haiku lovers to such lovely work. Excellent.

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- WabiSabi on June 14, 2013 at 10:51 PM said:
  
  And everyday you, and they, return the favor! Thank you
  
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kaykuala on June 14, 2013 at 8:53 PM said:

Yes, fleeting moments are the ones that make the yearnings linger! Nicely Wabi!

Hank

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Rallentanda on June 14, 2013 at 9:42 PM said:

Musical and delicate!

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Valli on June 15, 2013 at 3:12 AM said:

Good observation! Beautiful haiku!

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Panchali on June 15, 2013 at 8:28 AM said:

magical creation…Oh, it was so easy for you to write, wabisabi! Beautiful…

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Nanka on June 15, 2013 at 12:24 PM said:

Exquisite and so perfect!!….Ripples which slowly reach the shores and die a natural death!!

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siggiofmaine on June 15, 2013 at 12:57 PM said:

I love this…thank you !
Peace
Siggi

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Amrit Sinha on June 19, 2013 at 10:57 AM said:

Wow … what an image your words portray !!!

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