It all depends on the poem. Some poems don’t divide nicely into three lines so I present them as one-liners. I am not sure if that is a good enough reason to use the one line format, but it works for me! Here’s a link for more information:http://www.thehaikufoundation.org/2010/07/28/12th-sailing-one-line-haiku/
And what a lovely stir it is 🙂
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I like the image of the blue heron ~
My question though is with the format ~ do you normally write your words in one line, instead of the traditional 3 lines ~
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It all depends on the poem. Some poems don’t divide nicely into three lines so I present them as one-liners. I am not sure if that is a good enough reason to use the one line format, but it works for me! Here’s a link for more information:http://www.thehaikufoundation.org/2010/07/28/12th-sailing-one-line-haiku/
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The little fish jump under the shadow. Ripples. Very nice.
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You leave me longing for more…
Rippling with Fertility
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Love…smooth as silk.
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Every day you treat haiku lovers to such lovely work. Excellent.
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And everyday you, and they, return the favor! Thank you
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Yes, fleeting moments are the ones that make the yearnings linger! Nicely Wabi!
Hank
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Musical and delicate!
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Good observation! Beautiful haiku!
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magical creation…Oh, it was so easy for you to write, wabisabi! Beautiful…
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Exquisite and so perfect!!….Ripples which slowly reach the shores and die a natural death!!
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I love this…thank you !
Peace
Siggi
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Wow … what an image your words portray !!!
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