Deutzia

Posted on June 7, 2013 by Barbara Kaufmann

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deutzia –

a brand new sister

sharing the bed

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©2013 Wabi Sabi

For Carpe Diem ‘deutzia’

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7 thoughts on “Deutzia”

howanxious on June 7, 2013 at 7:06 PM said:

Wonderful.. 🙂

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henna ink on June 7, 2013 at 7:33 PM said:

Ha! This is hilarious. You’re talking about flowers, but I first thought of polygamists. :X

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Chevrefeuille on June 7, 2013 at 8:44 PM said:

Great take on Deutzia flowers.

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Mark M. Redfearn on June 8, 2013 at 9:01 AM said:

I was so enchanted with your offering that I rather shamelessly patterned my own haiku after yours. As they say, “Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.” 🙂

Deutzia

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- WabiSabi on June 8, 2013 at 10:30 AM said:
  
  I’m delighted that you created a (wonderful) poem using the word ‘sister’ from my poem!
  
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JazzBumpa on June 8, 2013 at 10:44 AM said:

intriguing word play

cheers!
JzB

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readinpleasure on June 12, 2013 at 11:40 AM said:

Beautiful play on words

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