Trembling

Posted on May 10, 2013 by Barbara Kaufmann

Dogwood © Wabi Sabi 2013

Dogwood © Wabi Sabi 2013

For Haiku Heights ‘story’

For Recuerda Mi Corazon ‘haiku my heart’

For Carpe Diem ”Kyoshi Takahama spring breeze’

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39 thoughts on “Trembling”

Cathy on May 10, 2013 at 6:38 AM said:

Beautiful!!! So very expressive. Yes, again!! Beautiful! Wishing you well!!

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readinpleasure on May 10, 2013 at 6:59 AM said:

I like the imagery here

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mindlovemisery on May 10, 2013 at 7:19 AM said:

This is stunning =)

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Bruce Ruston on May 10, 2013 at 7:25 AM said:

Very nicely put

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artmusedog on May 10, 2013 at 8:43 AM said:

wonderful visual and loving feel to your haiku ~ ^_^

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somepinkflowers on May 10, 2013 at 8:46 AM said:

{{ Perfection !!

The Wind
~~gets ~~around
but never stops long enough
to tell his secrets …
or
so i have been told … }}

♥

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Jamie Dedes on May 10, 2013 at 10:32 AM said:

Perfectly lovely …

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Dawn Elliott on May 10, 2013 at 10:40 AM said:

Love your style of writing! I try to be wistful and such, but reality keeps popping into my brain! Just beautiful in every way…

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Kim Mailhot on May 10, 2013 at 10:42 AM said:

Beautiful.
Have a wonderful weekend !

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Anthony North on May 10, 2013 at 10:54 AM said:

And a lovely story it is.

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rebecca on May 10, 2013 at 11:13 AM said:

moody and lovely in just the right way!

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Karen on May 10, 2013 at 11:21 AM said:

This is beautiful!

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Maggie Grace on May 10, 2013 at 12:57 PM said:

Dogwood is so delicate. Trembling in the wind is perfect!

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Nanka on May 10, 2013 at 1:28 PM said:

The wind then carries it on to form a legend!! Marvelous!!

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pirate on May 10, 2013 at 2:20 PM said:

oh dear…maybe your very best!!

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Lisa A.Williams on May 10, 2013 at 2:30 PM said:

Beautiful!

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Alice Keys on May 10, 2013 at 3:10 PM said:

This is a pearl.

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Lolly on May 10, 2013 at 3:57 PM said:

A lovely mystery.

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pritilisa on May 10, 2013 at 5:32 PM said:

And those dogwood trees have a story…
beautiful poem ♥♥

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heavenhappens on May 10, 2013 at 5:52 PM said:

This is extremely exquisitely beautiful ~ as always from your pen!

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magicalmysticalteacher on May 10, 2013 at 6:56 PM said:

I tremble—with joy—at your words!

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Poet Laundry on May 10, 2013 at 10:06 PM said:

Very sweet–enjoyed this!

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Dawn Elliott on May 11, 2013 at 12:04 AM said:

I love the idea ofthe fragrance of summer and gossamer wings – so incredibly beautifully written!

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Rallentanda on May 11, 2013 at 1:45 AM said:

delicate and fragile…a lovely one!

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Sam Edge, Writer on May 11, 2013 at 3:58 AM said:

This is beautiful …

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jrbsays on May 11, 2013 at 4:15 AM said:

Wow!
I was in a book shop today and saw a book with Wabi Sabi on the front cover. I picked it up thinking it might be by you and then learned the meaning of your pen name 🙂

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- WabiSabi on May 12, 2013 at 11:09 AM said:
  
  It is a fascinating concept, isn’t it?�
  
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Sam Edge, Writer on May 11, 2013 at 5:07 AM said:

Thins might be might my all time favorite Haiku. Great job…

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Stephanie on May 11, 2013 at 10:04 AM said:

oh yes…wishing you a beautiful day

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JazzBumpa on May 11, 2013 at 10:34 AM said:

so simple
deep
and lovely

all her secrets
are safe
with the wind

Cheers!
JzB

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Hazel on May 11, 2013 at 12:10 PM said:

Wonderful words, and very pretty blooms!

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Ese' s Voice on May 11, 2013 at 4:02 PM said:

Fragile and so well penned – every single detail!

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magicalmysticalteacher on May 11, 2013 at 9:36 PM said:

A whispered story is better than no story at all…

Standing Firm

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viv blake on May 12, 2013 at 1:31 PM said:

Gorgeous – I love haiga, as with the very few words possible in a haiku, the picture can expand the meaning.

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Ramesh Sood on May 12, 2013 at 1:38 PM said:

It is a rare gift to create a haiku like this…I am so very happy to be here..

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/and-stories-all-spillhaiku.html

RS

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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on May 12, 2013 at 2:15 PM said:

wow, perfection

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menons129 on May 13, 2013 at 12:04 AM said:

Fantastic. and uncomparable!!

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Marit on May 13, 2013 at 7:20 AM said:

Fabulous words! We all whisper our stories to the wind from time to time… hope you have a wonderful week

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siggiofmaine on May 14, 2013 at 3:51 PM said:

Truly inspiring. Thank you for sharing
Peace
Siggi

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