Dawn Star

Posted on April 11, 2013 by Barbara Kaufmann

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the archer bows

when mighty Dawn Star appears

to kiss the earth

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©WabiSabi 2013

For Carpe Diem ‘archer’

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9 thoughts on “Dawn Star”

readinpleasure on April 11, 2013 at 2:03 PM said:

I like the imagery of dawn star kissing the earth.

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Managua Gunn on April 11, 2013 at 4:44 PM said:

Clever play on words there…

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Maggie on April 11, 2013 at 5:16 PM said:

Beautiful…dawnstar…wish I’d read more about it.

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JazzBumpa on April 11, 2013 at 6:25 PM said:

Dawnstar – that Venus, right?
Same as the evening star.
Beautifully done.
“Archer bows” — Brilliant!

Cheers!
Jzb

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artmusedog on April 11, 2013 at 7:37 PM said:

What a lovely vision painted with your haiku ~ ^_^

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Chevrefeuille on April 11, 2013 at 7:45 PM said:

Wonderfully composed haiku Wabi … I like the imagery you have painted in this one very much Dawn Star kissing the Earth. Great.

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4joyjoanne on April 11, 2013 at 8:06 PM said:

Heavenly!

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siggiofmaine on April 11, 2013 at 9:06 PM said:

Love your imagery…lovely.
Peace
Sigg

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jrbsays on April 12, 2013 at 4:29 AM said:

Ah Wabi…seems we both had the same word play in mind today. I think yours wins however…lovely 🙂

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