haiku Humming April 3, 2013 Barbara Kaufmann14 Comments **** how the bees drone on and on about the flowers **** ©Wabi Sabi 2013 For Haiku Heights ‘drone’ Share this:ShareEmailPinterestTwitterLike this:Like Loading... Related
Cool I haven’t seen a 1-liner before very cool … 12 syllables or does it matter? Freestyle … did I say cool? LikeLike Reply
Thank you for your comment. This was the first time I tried a one-liner. From what I have read, the syllable count is not important as long as it is less than 17. Most of the one-liners I’ve read have been quite a bit shorter than 17 though. ________________________________ LikeLike Reply
Beautifully done….could have been 3-5-3…indeed.. You may like to visit: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/stingless-king.html RS LikeLike Reply
Simple and perfect
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The humming sound drones through the words! Lovely!
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Excellent one-liner! Excellent!
Pollinators’ Drone
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they do, they really do! perfect
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Love and spring is in the air. Nice take on the prompt.
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Cool I haven’t seen a 1-liner before very cool … 12 syllables or does it matter? Freestyle … did I say cool?
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Thank you for your comment. This was the first time I tried a one-liner. From what I have read, the syllable count is not important as long as it is less than 17. Most of the one-liners I’ve read have been quite a bit shorter than 17 though.
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succinct and buzzing
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Beautifully done….could have been 3-5-3…indeed..
You may like to visit:
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/stingless-king.html
RS
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Brought an instant smile to my face, this wonderful one line ‘ku. Well done!
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I’m sure they have a lot to talk about now the flowers are here! Nicely done.
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Loved this. quite smart 😀
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Beautiful 🙂
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Can you separate one from the other?? ….. splendid!!
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