Humming

Posted on April 3, 2013 by Barbara Kaufmann

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how the bees drone on and on about the flowers

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©Wabi Sabi 2013

For Haiku Heights ‘drone’

14 thoughts on “Humming”

readinpleasure on April 3, 2013 at 1:18 PM said:

Simple and perfect

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Gemma Wiseman on April 3, 2013 at 4:28 PM said:

The humming sound drones through the words! Lovely!

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Magical Mystical Teacher on April 3, 2013 at 4:43 PM said:

Excellent one-liner! Excellent!

Pollinators’ Drone

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4joyjoanne on April 3, 2013 at 5:09 PM said:

they do, they really do! perfect

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Alice Keys on April 3, 2013 at 8:11 PM said:

Love and spring is in the air. Nice take on the prompt.

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Sam Edge, Writer on April 3, 2013 at 8:56 PM said:

Cool I haven’t seen a 1-liner before very cool … 12 syllables or does it matter? Freestyle … did I say cool?

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- WabiSabi on April 4, 2013 at 3:13 PM said:
  
  Thank you for your comment. �This was the first time I tried a one-liner. From what I have read, � the syllable count is not important as long as it is less than 17. �Most of the one-liners I’ve read have been quite a bit shorter than 17 though. �
  
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ramblingsfromamum on April 3, 2013 at 11:15 PM said:

succinct and buzzing

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Ramesh Sood on April 3, 2013 at 11:23 PM said:

Beautifully done….could have been 3-5-3…indeed..

You may like to visit:

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/stingless-king.html

RS

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Lolly on April 4, 2013 at 12:33 AM said:

Brought an instant smile to my face, this wonderful one line ‘ku. Well done!

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oneofaclass on April 4, 2013 at 3:20 AM said:

I’m sure they have a lot to talk about now the flowers are here! Nicely done.

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ladynimue on April 4, 2013 at 1:38 PM said:

Loved this. quite smart 😀

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Green Speck on April 4, 2013 at 3:59 PM said:

Beautiful 🙂

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Nanka on April 5, 2013 at 2:17 PM said:

Can you separate one from the other?? ….. splendid!!

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