‘Empty Vault of Heaven’


solitary mountain

an eagle’s whispering wing

takes me


©Wabi Sabi 2013

For Carpe Diem ‘ Onitsura’s empty vault of heaven’


16 thoughts on “‘Empty Vault of Heaven’

    • Alice, I just wrote the poem. A reader can interpret it any way she wants. When I write haiku, I try to convey a specific feeling I had in a given moment in time. But the reader is free to interpret the poem based on her own experiences and feelings. That being said, you can rest assured, I’ve never been carried off by an eagle.:) My ‘moment’ was a contemplative one, the result of meditation. Thanks for reading and commenting. It is so helpful to get feedback on how a poem is read and interpreted by others!



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