haiku / poetry Shimmering Attraction February 22, 2013 Barbara Kaufmann14 Comments *** the way the light dances  on a  spider’s  sequined web – dressed to kill *** ©WabiSabi 2013 For Haiku Heights ‘shimmer’ Related
Very clever! For some reason I see a formal dinner with the spider in pearls… Must be the flu bug spinning its own webs in my brain. LikeLike Reply
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“Dressed to kill” I was sliding along on he pretty glimmer than this pulled me up short. Perfect as a zen rap on the head. LikeLike Reply
Beautiful imagery. I’m imagining the black widows I occasionally find here, dressed to the nines and looking deceptively innocent. Nice… LikeLike Reply
Laughed! Delightfully “dressed to kill”–I mean, that’s not nice, but in words it totally works. LikeLike Reply
Very clever! For some reason I see a formal dinner with the spider in pearls… Must be the flu bug spinning its own webs in my brain.
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Amazing observation! Amazing haiku!!
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You went deep in imagery … wonderful !!!
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“Dressed to kill” I was sliding along on he pretty glimmer than this pulled me up short. Perfect as a zen rap on the head.
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Beautiful imagery. I’m imagining the black widows I occasionally find here, dressed to the nines and looking deceptively innocent. Nice…
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Love the idea of the sequined web!!! Excellent.
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Striking image of the spider’s goal,,the beauty in the trap,,,
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Even an arachnid needs to eat. Nice haiku. 🙂
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Very thoughtful haiku!
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Yes!
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What a clever take on the prompt. Lovely visuals, Wabi 🙂
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loved your haiku! unexpected last line, though not far from reality!
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Laughed! Delightfully “dressed to kill”–I mean, that’s not nice, but in words it totally works.
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