Psalm 23

Posted on January 31, 2013 by Barbara Kaufmann

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in winter darkness

a tiny bird might wonder

where the green fields are

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©WabiSabi 2013

For Carpe Diem ‘verdant’

15 thoughts on “Psalm 23”

siggiofmaine on January 31, 2013 at 2:55 PM said:

I love this….thanks.

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elleceef on January 31, 2013 at 6:01 PM said:

Indeed it might,,,,I enjoyed this very much,,,

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JazzBumpa on January 31, 2013 at 6:51 PM said:

Green fields are resting
Under a blanket of snow
To waken in Spring

Cheers!
JzB

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Alice Keys on January 31, 2013 at 7:45 PM said:

This is lovely. You find the beauty in the depth of winter.

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magicalmysticalteacher on January 31, 2013 at 8:28 PM said:

I like how you’ve created your own version of the green pastures (and still waters) that one finds in Psalm 23.

Verdant Bowl

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meenakshi on January 31, 2013 at 9:54 PM said:

very creative and observant. Yes they must be wondering!

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Chevrefeuille on January 31, 2013 at 11:11 PM said:

A young bird starting it’s life … as verdant as youngsters … yes they will ask where the green fields are.

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Green Speck on January 31, 2013 at 11:30 PM said:

I hope some one shows the way !!!

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Gemma Wiseman on February 1, 2013 at 5:22 AM said:

So sweet giving the little feathered one some inner feelings and a sense of wondering!

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readinpleasure on February 1, 2013 at 8:05 AM said:

Creatively beautiful, 🙂

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Lisa A.Williams on February 1, 2013 at 8:53 AM said:

Love your take on Psalm 23, one of my favorite passages. Lovely Haiku!

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artmusedog on February 1, 2013 at 9:53 AM said:

Lovely haiku ~ full of wonderful meaning ~

Carol of: A Creative Harbor ^_^ on blogger

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Tarun Mazumdar on February 1, 2013 at 11:21 AM said:

Must be painful for the tiny one…

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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on February 1, 2013 at 4:47 PM said:

How you manage to use the prompt twice is very well done.

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ElizOF on February 5, 2013 at 8:59 PM said:

You share such wonderful wisdom in your haiku. TY! 🙂
Eliz

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