Carpe Diem #63

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 embers still burn
 in the early morning light
afterglow 
 
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©WabiSabi 2012
 

The prompt at Carpe Diem today is ‘charcoal’   This poem started out  with two people stoking a coal-burning stove.  After several rewrites it  evolved into the above poem.  I think the charcoal is there in the poem somewhere.  What do you think?

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