Sae Kaeru Posted on March 1, 2013 by WabiSabi **** Cold Front ©WabiSabi 2013 **** ©WabiSabi 2013 For Carpe Diem ‘returning cold’ About these ads Like this:Like Loading...
Oh, my goodness…this is befitting of the change of mood here. Your image and words are perfectly paired!
What a difference in mood of the day whether the sun is shining or the dark clouds are looming … Cold’s Deception Lurks
Very nice. It’s amazing how a dark mood affects all those around.
Very nice. Start with weather and go to relationship. Nice transition. An attention getter.
Oh, my goodness…this is befitting of the change of mood here. Your image and words are perfectly paired!
Lovely jux. returning coldness and moods. Love it.
What a climatic climax…bravo
Awesome haiga, very strong haiku … with a deeper layer.
your dark mood
fills the space with silent rage
untouchable you
Very nice, dark weather is depressing at times.
well said !!!
really evocative, Ican feel that cold
Good one!
An affront / Changes spring’s atmosphere / Freezies blood
An affront / Changes spring’s atmosphere / Freezes blood
(Don’t know, where the i was coming from?)
Were you writing about me?
Cold Snap
You are so subtle! Thank you, Teacher.
Made me chuckle…who can’t relate to that?
What a difference in mood of the day whether the sun is shining or the dark clouds are looming …
Cold’s Deception Lurks
That was a very good multilayered haiku. Kudo
Well done.
Does weather affect your mood? I think it does mine sometimes.
Cheers!
JzB
Powerful. So few words but they say a lot