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on a city street -
where does a caterpillar
change its clothes?
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©WabiSabi 2013
For Carpe Diem‘caterpillar’
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on a city street -
where does a caterpillar
change its clothes?
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©WabiSabi 2013
For Carpe Diem‘caterpillar’
What a delightful haiku ~ ‘where does a catepillar change its clothes’… Wonderful!
Fantastic! And what a statement against industrialisation!
very thoughtful! very creative!!
where indeed… this is great.
Simply marvelous! Well done!
It’s especially difficult these days, since there are no more phone booths!
Great insight.
there was a time
streets were lined with their closets
dutch elm disease
Cheers!
JzB
Outstanding.
You should write a children’s book!
haha ! sweet
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Beautiful. And the butterflies are here, at the beach with me. West coast monarchs winter in Santa Cruz and locations south.
excellent point….where indeed….this was my favorite so far…
Not even superman can, how would a butterfly do it.
I thought the same as MMT –
For Wabisabi and MMT
a renga for ‘change’
the phone booth – it’s gone
the way of the dinosaur
museum pieces
super heroes flutter by
as we dream of butterflies
catch the comic book
as the wind attempts to read
shazam, kapow and hurrah…
(c) JP/davh
Wow! What a wonderful haiku you share here WabiSabi. Worthy to have been written by a classical haiku master. Chapeau